In my group we all decided to include crime and psychological thriller.
characters: 1 girl, 1 antagonist and one victim.
Starter: Amarni walks in the hut while his walking he sees blood drops on the floor this makes Armani walk faster just to see what happens because his sisters at home alone and he panics. When amarni runs through the long balcony he realises that his front door is wide open. Amarni stops at and slows down because his in such a shock that who would go into his house and do such a thing like that. Amarni shouts his sisters name out and there's no response from his sister. Amarni takes slow footsteps into his house. He realises someone's on the floor the first thing he sees is a hand. He runs towards the hand and stops and slowly looks at this sisters wondering what has happened to her. He is In such a shock that he is wondering why someone would kill his sister. Armani's sister is covered in blood.
Middle: Amarni steps back sits on the floor and wraps him self in a ball wondering why this has happened to him. The camera blacks out and amarnis in a black room and is processed all he can see is his sister looking at him and she has blood all other her. Amarnis trying to reach out to his sister but she keeps fading away. Amarnis getting weaker and weaker. Amarni starts to fight him self. his sister whispers 'why I was your sister' respectively.
End: Then the camera switches back to amarni being at home with a knife covered in blood with his sister on the floor dead.
However, in our story board we have included a protagonist. We have changed our idea and took the antagonist out and we have twisted the roles and idea so the video can finish with a cliff hanger.
The opening is detailed and I can envisage the start of your scene. The middle and the end needs a bit more detail in terms of what will happen.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-use some key micro-elements that you plan to use
-at the end, how do you want the audience to feel and respond to your idea