Final idea
Genre: Thriller Sub-genres: Horror, crime and action.
Characters: victim: Ruth
Protagonist: Amani
Tittle: That One Night
Amani walks in the hut while his walking he sees blood drops on the floor this makes Amani walk faster just to see what happens because his sisters at home alone and he panics. When amarni runs through the long balcony he realises that his front door is wide open. Amani stops at and slows down because his in such a shock that who would go into his house and do such a thing like that. Amarni shouts his sisters name out and there's no response from his sister. Amani takes slow footsteps into his house. He realises someone's on the floor the first thing he sees is a hand. He runs towards the hand and stops and slowly looks at this sisters wondering what has happened to her. He is In such a shock that he is wondering why someone would kill his sister. Amani's sister is covered in blood. Amarni steps back sits on the flor and wraps him self in a ball wondering why this has happened to him. The camera blacks out and amarnis in a black room and is processed all he can see is his sister looking at him and she has blood all other her. Amanis trying to reach out to his sister but she keeps fading away. Amanis getting weaker and weaker. Amani starts to fight him self. his sister whispers 'why I was your sister' respectively. Then the camera switches back to Amani being at home with a knife covered in blood with his sister on the floor dead. Furthermore, our antagonist will be wearing bright clothes at the beginning but towards then end he will have dirt on his clothes to show that he is the antagonist and he isn't innocent like he was in the beginning. However, in the first 10 minutes the antagonist will have a clear face without no make up After 10 minutes he will have blood on his face because he will be hugging a dead body with disturbing cuts on it. Therefore, our victim will be wearing bring clothes with blood all over her because she has been killed in a very disturbing way. She will have n make up on her face to show that she is innocent because her face is clean with her hair tied up in a pony tail. When Amani starts to walk up the stairs we will use back lighting and we will have his shadow appearing on the ground because he will have a hidden identity. However, we will have top lighting so the audience can see the dead body and know whats going on in the movie.We will have only a few iconography; lens to show the audience that our antagonist is processed and a knife to show the audience who killed the female victim.In the beginning of the movie the audience will hear Amani breathing once he sees the blood on the floor which is a on screen sound. We will also have Amani speaking to him self once he sees his front door s open.
As a whole group we got influenced by sycho when the female victim is getting killed we decided to make a scene like that. Therefore we also got influenced by identity when the audience wasn't able to figure out who the missing identity was.As a group we want the audience to be shocked when they find out that the antagonist killed they're own sister.We want the audience to have so many questions in they're mind for example; why did he kill is own sister? why didnt he know whats going on? how did he become processed? why did it end with a cliff hanger?
However, in our story board we have included a protagonist. We have changed our idea and took the antagonist out and we have twisted the roles and idea so the video can finish with a cliff hanger.
This needs to follow the structure asked in class:
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- What themes does your thriller present?
- What response will you get from your audience?
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I have made improvements.
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